This is the definition of beauty
I loved every single second of it and I would definitely buy it. Probably one of the best chill-out trance songs I have ever heard (if not, the best). I also have nothing to say in the c&c area, this is perfect man. Great job. By the way, when can I expect your next release on iTunes?
Such a sick track man. I love the way it progresses. Everything fits together so perfectly! The bass really stood out to me aswell. I dunno' why but I just love it. Can't wait to hear the finished version! Awesome work man :).
Y R U NOT ONLINE? FUCK YOU >:(
(omgz i luv ur musicz)
Seems you got a pretty natural feel for house (considering this is the first house song I've heard from you so I'm assuming it's one of your first). I think you should concentrate on your instruments more than anything though. Your melodies and composition seem fine for now.
First, that god damn bass. It'd be pretty good if it wasn't so damn dirty. As I told you on msn, cut the high freq' on it and I'd boost the bass on it a bit (Just so it backs the song a little more and the bass is usually one of the main instruments in house so you want it to be PHAT!). Layering is a good idea too. As you'd probably know, the more you combine, experiment & play-around. The more of an understanding you'll have for mixing sounds and achieving certain sounds. It'll also add more character to the song.
The kick might need some tuning up afterwards so I'd just find a good balance in the low bass for both, the bass and kick then lower the mids on the kick (Not much though, we just wanna' saturate it a little and reduce the overhead sound on the kick).
Anyways, this is all I could strain out of my brain. Basically, this song needs some thump and HOPEFULLY what I've written will help you achieve that. Good luck!
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it and will try out your suggestions, when I fix my shit : P
Ah, the nostalgic memories of being a kid came back to me when I listened to this. Everything instrument fits perfectly and the atmosphere is beautiful. It really paints a picture in your head. Excellent job and congrats on getting top 5 :).
Dude, this is sooooo god damn good! DL'd for sure. You had me by 0:11. Just that background melody and percussion was enough to make me chuckle with enjoyment. Not to mention how well the vocals were done in this. I fucking applaud you guys on this, amazing job!
LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIQUIIIIIID!!!! IT'S LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIQUID!!!
You brought tears to my eyes
Never has any song on NG ever done that, you bastard! :P. The isolation of that piano and the chilled effects over it just tug at your heartstrings. Not to mention, the tune the piano plays is so beautiful but sad at the same time. I have to thank you. I consider myself lucky to have heard such a beautiful song. Astounding job.
Didn't expect this one coming, did you? :P
Well thank you for the kind words.
Didn't stop laughing throughout the whole thing.
This needs no critique for it is perfect. Thank you for making this!
thank you for listening!
TAKE IT FURTHER!
This has gotta' be my favorite melody from you! It's so happy and uplifting! You really need to take this song further dude, it's got a lot of potentiol. And if you don't, I'm remixing it >;D. Anyways, I can't be bothered writing a huge review for this. Doesn't need the critique anyway, it's already so damn awesome! And by the way, the intro is perfect as it is dude :P.
I love emotional songs and the atmosphere and melodies in this, just screamed it. This does need some work though dude. For instance:
I found your synths lacked power but it's justifiable since the song is ambient and not trance. Still though, you should layer your synths. You can create some pretty amazing sounds if you do (and this works of all aspects of the song. Drums, synths and even basses).
Where was the bass in this song man? I didn't hear one through-out the entire song? I reckon' something smooth with a creative bassline would fit pretty well but eh', doesn't really matter. Song is good how it is.
Drums were a let down man. The kick lacked power and the hatline was a simple 4x4. If you wanna' progress on dude, you've gotta' get creative. When you make a hatline. Don't just use one hihat. Use like 3 or 4 and see if you can create something original and unique instead of the generic 4x4 hatline. And about the kick. Layer it.
The composition and structure were average. Nothing to great or exciting.
Anyways, that's all from me. Hope the review helps man.
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