Damn
The intro grabbed me. I just knew this was gonna' be a good track. Nice intro, love the distant bass. Sure, it needs to be mixed and you need to choose better instruments but your composition is very interesting and very good on that note.
Your synths are good but as I said, you need to mix them and make them fit in with the rest of the song. Also, they aren't exactly powerful enough. The drums kinda' over-power everything.
Very creative bass. I really think it could be louder though. Maybe increase the low-bass freq' on it too so, it has that boom behind it to make the background fuller.
Your drums do over-power this track but then there's the one thing I can barely hear and that's the clap. I really suggest you work on this side of the track. Your crash sweeps are too loud as is some of the crashes. Your hats lack reverb and stand out way too much. One thing I do like is the kick. It has boom and punch to it so all I'm gonna' say is just turn it down a little to let the synths and bass through.
As for composition, this track is as close to perfect as it gets. Your melodies are beautiful and your transitions are amazing. Great work.
So as I said. You need to work on the drums and get better at mixing. Nice song mate, hope to hear more from you.