Lol
The lyrics are pretty fucking funny dude. As for your singing, I dunno', it's okay? Lol, seriously though. If you did proper lyrics with this and some more instruments, it would turn out pretty nice!
Lol
The lyrics are pretty fucking funny dude. As for your singing, I dunno', it's okay? Lol, seriously though. If you did proper lyrics with this and some more instruments, it would turn out pretty nice!
oh really? well i will have to try it! i mean it i want to write a song thats like a real love song or some thing, im not sure. you know i be shy of my voice
YAAAAAAAAAAY
THIS IS COOL SONG MUSIC. HOW DO U MAKE IT?
I R USE PRO FL STUDIO TOOLS CUBEASON EDITION 2009
AND HOW U MAKE UR SAWNGZ
All your new stuff is amazing
Dude, I'm absolutely loving all your new stuff. Tuesday Bluesday and this are both amazingly good (And very pro' sounding for that matter). Where will I be able to buy this album because I am really interested.
I CAN'T GET OVER HOW GOOD THIS IS!
Immune showed me this song the other day and my jaw dropped. You got so damn good in a matter of months. I was hooked at 0:03. This is absolutely amazing, it's got so much damn feeling!
You definitely have to release to NG or if not, NG cut, please!
Soooooooooon.
Dude..
This is another song that I can't critique because it's so damn good. Melodies are awesome, drums are heavy and that kick makes your heart jump and it's mixed very well as well. This is one awesome song, keep it going!
Thanks alot! xD
Nice dude
I quite like the house-kinda' beat you've got going here. Now, I know this isn't a remix but you could've atleast had a spin-off of the epic breakdown in God Is A DJ. I LOVE that bit of the song! I would write a big, helpful review but I'm too tired, lol. So, I'll say this. Great song and a nice way to put that accapella to a new use. Keep it up :)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. :)
Nice
Intro hooked me right away. The melodies in this song are awesome, I'll give you that but this song defienetly needs some suring up in the production and composition area.
Okay, your synths and lead need to be fixed badly. Your lead is too trebley and a touch too over-powering and the synth that comes in at 0:11 needs to be faded in or something because it comes on too strong. I really do love the opening synth though. Sounds awesome. I quite like the bell at the end too.
Your bass can be heard at the intro but after 0:53, it's barely even there. Really, you need to turn your mix down because I know that if you tried increasing your bass, it would distort the rest of the song. Anyways, the lack of bass is making the background of the song sound empty so just turn your mix down and make the bass phatter (Increase the low-bass and it would sound good if the damn lead wasn't so trebley but, more distortion too).
Your drums are ok. Your kick is punchy and hard and boy, does it fit the style of this track. Your clap isn't high enough in my opinion. I want to be able to really be able to hear it. As for your hats, need to decrease the treble because it's making the lead sound worse.
As for your melodies. They're untouchable. I really love them. One thing though, 2:50 is really out of harmony.
Anyways, that's about it. One more thing, the FX at 0:15 is ear peircing. Please, get rid' of it. Great song :)
You're gonna' be big
This song is crazy man. You already had a strong grip on me as soon as the song started. If you would have used a better clap and maybe worked on the mastering and added some reeverb here and there, this song would be 2x as incredible.
Okay, you're all good in the lead and synths department. There are a few that need some work though (Eg. the synth at 0:39). The lead at 2:23 is awesome but it sounds like you have a multiband compressor or a soundgoodizier or something like that over it. Whatever it be, it sounds compressed and it's really now powerful enough (Also, the pad behind the lead at 2:23 would sound really sick if you dropped it chord, I think anyway).
You drums are the letdown to me. The only thing I like is the snare rolls. You kick over-powers at 2:48 and the clap is too short. If you used something that has a longer tail on it, it would work alot better and fit the sound of the song.
I like your hats but I don't think your hat-line is powerful enough but it's good. I'd add a couple percs to it but it's not really needed at all.
Your bass is okay but I think if you increased the low-bass and treble (after you've fixed the kick) it will really stand out and become more powerful. I know in songs like this, you need a hard, powerful bass that can really be heard and it doesn't really come across for me.
As for the composition. It's perfect. You've really caught a grip of the pro' sound everyone looks for and I applaud you on that. Anyways, great song, keep up the great work.
Thanks a lot :D
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